My Pencil-box

注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(3)题目已为你写好。
参考词汇:pencil-box铅笔盒,eraser橡皮,ruler尺子
要求:
语句通顺,语法正确,条理清晰,表达完整。

📖读题

介绍铅笔盒及其来源

✍️写句子

我有一个可爱的铅笔盒。是我父母送给我的礼物。

📖读题

描述外观和结构

✍️写句子

它是蓝色的,上面有可爱的图案。它有两层。

📖读题

里面的文具及其作用

✍️写句子

我的铅笔、橡皮和尺子住在里面。它们每天帮助我学习。

📖读题

表达情感

✍️写句子

它是我的好朋友。我一直好好照顾它。

我有一个可爱的铅笔盒。是我父母送给我的礼物。它是蓝色的,上面有可爱的图案。它有两层。我的铅笔、橡皮和尺子住在里面。它们每天帮助我学习。它是我的好朋友。我一直好好照顾它。

📌word choice

pencil-box, parents give it to me

🧩sentence construction

I have a pencil-box. My parents give it to me.

📌word choice

blue, pictures on it, two layers

🧩sentence construction

It is blue and has pictures on it. It has two layers.

📌word choice

pencils, eraser, ruler, live in it, help me study

🧩sentence construction

My pencils, eraser and ruler live in it. They help me study.

📌word choice

good friend, take care of it

🧩sentence construction

It is my good friend. I take care of it.

I have a pencil-box. My parents give it to me.

It is blue and has pictures on it. It has two layers.

My pencils, eraser and ruler live in it. They help me study.

It is my good friend. I take care of it.

基础分:I have a pencil-box. My parents give it to me.
It is blue and has pictures on it. It has two layers. My pencils, eraser and ruler live in it. They help me study.
It is my good friend. I take care of it.

良好分:I have a lovely pencil-box. My parents give it to me as a gift.
It is blue and has cute pictures on it. It has two layers. My pencils, eraser and ruler live in it. They help me study every day.
It is my good friend. I take good care of it all the time.

优秀分:I have a lovely pencil-box. My parents give it to me as a gift.
It is blue and has cute pictures on it. It has two layers. My pencils, eraser and ruler live in it. They help me study every day.
It is my good friend. I take good care of it all the time.

太棒了!